The Mud RUN!
3 2 1 jump! I jumped into the mud. The sticky mud submerge over my feet, I quickly pull my leg out. I climb onto the island huffing ,saying “that’s was terrible under my breath”.
Suddenly, a voice came into my head. It sounded like the person was saying ‘‘ If you think that’s terrible try looking at this” As I look up, waiting to see something even worse…… My jaw drop my ,heart gave a thump.
This time it was mud but it was 1000 time worse , the mud wasn’t sticky anymore but now it’s …...watery! Smelly ,and deeper than ever!
As I dip my feet slowly in the mud. I turn around “ Do I have to do this” I said nervously begging for the person to say “No”. “ Yes” the man said loudly and clearly, my heart gave an even harder thump.
I jump in “ Why didn’t I come in the mud slowly” I wondered to myself, while I was starting to sink. I swam up, struggling to breathe. I swam across the watery mud trying not to sink, as I look at the island ahead, I just knew I couldn’t do it , I gave up I start to sink.
Suddenly a hand grab me, it pull me up. I couldn’t really see because of all the mud in my eye, so I walk on.“ There’s the finish line ahead” I screamed happily. I look down, MUD will I survive?
Good writing I like the use of words!
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